Monday, December 31, 2007
A call for a presidential debate on science and technology
Among those supporting the effort are numerous Nobel and Crafoord Laureates, heads of scientific organizations and institutions, leading scientists, government officials, and business and publishing luminaries.
http://www.sciencedebate2008.com/www/index.php?id=7
Sri Lanka scientist changes national policy to protect environment and reduce tsunami impact
By demonstrating that human activity greatly increased the devastation of the 2004 tsunami, they sparked enforcement of laws against coral mining and other environmentally unsafe practices.
Their report was published in the 16 August 2005 issue of Eos, the newspaper of the
American Geophysical Union.
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/12/25/science/25conv.html?ref=science
http://www.agu.org/pubs/crossref/2005/2005EO330002.shtml
The curse of expertise
"[O]nce you’ve become an expert in a particular subject, it’s hard to imagine not knowing what you do.... When it’s time to accomplish a task...those in the know get it done the way it has always been done, stifling innovation...."
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/12/30/business/30know.html?em&ex=1199250000&en=
4b43ce36ce3b24df&ei=5087%0A
Monday, December 10, 2007
1919 paper leads to today’s news feature on Yahoo: "Flu mystery solved"
Scientists who want to get the results of their work before the public would do well to consider how “Flu mystery solved” became a news feature on today’s Yahoo.
While a newspaper ordinarily reports on current events, a clever writer can leap across a century.
The December 10 Yahoo banner linked a reader to Gina Kolata’s story of December 5 in The New York Times, “Study Shows Why Flu Likes Winter.”
So how about 88 years? The lead author of the October 2007 study was Peter Palese, who chairs the microbiology department at Mount Sinai School of Medicine in
That laboratory guinea pigs began to die soon after the long-ago outbreak of influenza in
· “To our knowledge, we demonstrate for the first time that cold temperatures and low relative humidity are favorable to the spread of influenza virus.”
· “We provide direct, experimental evidence to support the role of weather conditions in the dynamics of influenza and thereby address a long-standing question fundamental to the understanding of influenza epidemiology and evolution.”
By comparing Kolata’s and Palese’s articles, one can learn more about writing for different audiences and with different goals. As the authors undertook the process of informing their respective readers about aerosol-transmitted flu viruses, their first consideration may have been to use appropriate vocabulary and structure to communicate their key points.
The Gopan and Swan article discussed in the post on this blog of December 5 sets forth guidelines for evaluating figures and other aspects of writing:
- Is information placed where a reader would expect to find it?
- Newspaper and scientific journal writing follow conventions in placement of elements. A news story is often built on an inverted pyramid with the most important information at the top, and a journal article is divided into sections with subheadings. Did each author confine topics appropriately or does the information jump around confusingly?
- Did the author put old information in the topic position and new information in the stress position, and give the reader enough background to understand the new?
- Did the author take advantage of the natural structure of thought to lead the reader to key points and control the reader’s perceptions?
- Is the most important information in a sentence toward the end, thus giving it the most natural stress?
- Is the vocabulary appropriate to the reader?
- Does the writing proceed logically or does one sentence contradict another?
- Does the verb closely follow the subject?
- Does the topic sentence of each paragraph link the preceding and following information, providing perspective and context?
- Are hypotheses presented clearly enough to allow the reader to analyze the author's conclusions?
- Is the author convincing?
Answering such questions will help authors improve communication by enhancing style and filling in material needed to support conclusions.
http://www.nytimes.com/2007/12/05/health/research/05flu.html?no_interstitial
http://pathogens.plosjournals.org/perlserv/?request=get-document&doi=
10.1371/journal.ppat.0030151
http://www.amstat.org/publications/jcgs/sci.pdf
Sunday, December 9, 2007
High school girls win two $100,000 grand prizes in math, science and technology competition
"Isha Jain, a senior at Freedom High School in Bethlehem, Pennsylvania, won the $100,000 scholarship in the individual category for research on bone growth. Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, seniors at Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York, won the $100,000 prize in the team category, which they will share equally, for research on tuberculosis."
"The national finals were judged by a panel of nationally renowned scientists and mathematicians headed by lead judge Dr. Joseph Taylor, winner of the Nobel Prize in Physics and James S. McDonnell Distinguished University Professor of Physics, Emeritus, Princeton University."
For details on the winning projects and other Siemens winners, see http://www.siemens-foundation.org/pool/resources_for/press/2007-08_national_
winners.pdf.
MSNBC Chief Medical Editor Dr. Nancy Snyderman also reported on the competition. She noted that more than half of the 2007-2008 finalists were female students. To view the video, see:
http://video.msn.com/?mkt=en-us&brand=msnbc&tab=m5&rf=http://www.msnbc.msn.com/
id/3032118/&fg=&from=00&vid=5a08bd96-dcb0-4355-bf70-4da34c844081&playlist=
videoByTag:mk:us:vs:0:tag:News_Editors%20Picks:ns:MSNVideo_Top_Cat:ps:10:sd:-
1:ind:1:ff:8A
Wednesday, December 5, 2007
Gopen and Swan: A classic article on scientific writing
Numerous courses and books on scientific writing in English reference a classic, "The Science of Science Writing," by George D. Gopen and Judith A. Swan, first published in American Scientist (Nov-Dec 1990), Volume 78, 550-558.
In fewer than ten pages, the authors deliver a bouquet of rhetorical principles and techniques that can ensure clarity while avoiding oversimplification. They provide concise examples of the effective use of topic position and stress, placement of old (linkage) information and new information, and how to help readers focus their efforts on understanding content rather than unraveling sentences.
Tossing out a ball of data and analysis is not the same thing as communication, which requires that readers grasp the author’s key points. To be successful, a scientist must follow the same advice given to a salesperson, a labor negotiator or a lecturer: Know your audience. To a writer, this includes understanding the way a reader interprets material.
Relying on research in the fields of linguistics, rhetoric and cognitive psychology, Gopen and Swan state "three rhetorical principles based on reader expectations: First, grammatical subjects should be followed as soon as possible by their verbs; second, every unit of discourse, no matter the size, should serve a single function or make a single point; and, third, information intended to be emphasized should appear at points of syntactic closure."
While no fixed algorithms apply to good scientific writing, the authors believe it is most important to: “Put in the topic position the old information that links backward; put in the stress position the new information you want the reader to emphasize."
By following the natural structure of how readers learn, an informed writer will also identify gaps in the science underpinning the work. As the writer gains more control over how the reader interprets the information, “the structure of the prose becomes the structure of the scientific argument. Improving either one will improve the other.”
http://www.amstat.org/publications/jcgs/sci.pdf